Negation
| Charlotte |
Nov 30 2004, 03:42 PM
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Unity, Freedom and Peace supporter Group: Celtic Lyrics Moderator Posts: 626 Joined: 29-March 03 From: Paris, France Member No.: 6 |
After the huge success ( :huh: ) of my Banshee's Songs, I still dare to show another of my poor poems to you all !
Negation I woke up in the fresh morning Had a vision torn frightening The light, the light's been too bright ! Love, love, I turned blind in the night. I see nothing but you. Mid-day by the stream walking Heard a voice broken thrilling The sound, the sound's been too loud! Love, love, I turned deaf in the shroud. I hear nothing but you. I fell on my midnight bed sleeping Felt a fire shattered wakening The touch, the touch's been burning ! Love, love, I got burnt up screaming I feel nothing but you. In the night just a whisper The light and the pain by the river None of it's true cause you are gone Away from me and nothing to be done. I see, hear, feel nothing, not even you. |
| Patrick |
Nov 30 2004, 06:35 PM
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Head of Moderators Group: Celtic Lyrics Moderator Posts: 613 Joined: 29-March 03 From: Mid-west United States Member No.: 5 |
BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO
(me thinks Charlotte will be moving to Ireland soon) |
| Roidsear |
Dec 1 2004, 08:06 AM
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-=[ M�istir na amhr�in ]=- Group: Root Admin Posts: 162 Joined: 23-June 03 From: Gearm�in Member No.: 56 |
Tathn�onn s� go m�r liom!
I like it very much! |
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