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Charlotte
Nov 30 2004, 03:42 PM
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After the huge success ( :huh: ) of my Banshee's Songs, I still dare to show another of my poor poems to you all !



Negation


I woke up in the fresh morning
Had a vision torn frightening
The light, the light's been too bright !
Love, love, I turned blind in the night.
I see nothing but you.

Mid-day by the stream walking
Heard a voice broken thrilling
The sound, the sound's been too loud!
Love, love, I turned deaf in the shroud.
I hear nothing but you.

I fell on my midnight bed sleeping
Felt a fire shattered wakening
The touch, the touch's been burning !
Love, love, I got burnt up screaming
I feel nothing but you.

In the night just a whisper
The light and the pain by the river
None of it's true cause you are gone
Away from me and nothing to be done.
I see, hear, feel nothing, not even you.
Patrick
Nov 30 2004, 06:35 PM
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BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO

(me thinks Charlotte will be moving to Ireland soon)
Roidsear
Dec 1 2004, 08:06 AM
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-=[ M�istir na amhr�in ]=-


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Tathn�onn s� go m�r liom!
I like it very much!


 

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