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Banshee's Songs
Charlotte |
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The Banshee's songs are a series of five poems I wrote, mostly a work on alliterations, save the last two ones, more on rhymes. They are more or less long, more or less structured. I wanted their meanings to remain obscur. Yet I want to say a few words about the fourth (Requiem to Katarzyna) because I wrote it for someone in particular. Katarzyna was a young woman aged 19 when she died. I did only know her through friends of mine. But after her death, her best friend decided to have all of Katarzyna's writings published. She then sent me a copy of the book. I've read it this summer. Katarzyna was an exceptional writer. And she excelled in both novels and poetry. Writing this poem for her was a way for me to give an hommage to her.
Banshee's Song I heard a child crying in the morning Heart broke, thought of her Other child lost in the wind Did the Banshee cry for thee ? Saoirse so was your name And you held on to Freedom Claws closed on her deep dark dress Thou bled blood, beaten broken heart And from your wrists thou write The end of your endless youth Tore the fragile fabric of your life As you had torn Freedom's dress Shattered your name and pride Mother's heart Broken brothers Silent sisters Banshee's Song II She wandered wailing and weeping With the moon's livid and liquid light Banshee dressed with torn hearts And sang her sinister sad song. Banshee's Song III My sorrows are silent as written words My wounds, still sore, are writing Slaughtering my wonders with swords My written words are silent as sorrows Songs sliding out of the Woman's wail Weeping silently sweet I write The seas, the winds, wandering, I sail the Woman's wail slides out her songs Banshee's Song IV (Requiem to Katarzyna) In your grave sleeping you lie; In your book your words do cry. Haven't you heard the Banshee Cry louder than any other night? The night you left didn't she Burst out into tears and light? For you didn't leave this world dark: On the pages you left the mark Of your unique and immortal Soul, Of your deep dark enlightened Soul. Banshee's Song V It was cold. I woke up in the night The mournful moon was full and bright I hardened my heart, walked out with fright And long lingered in the clear light The moon lamented with liquid moans And the swans whistled their silent song The wind wore grey leaves ; lying down, I learnt to mourn for I was wrong A cry burst out, tore the terrifying air I moved not, in the dark I did not dare A fay walked there, faery wild on the lawn She sang her sinister song and I felt down Do you hear, do you hear, gentle love? The piano plays our sadly silented songs The Banshee's voice vainly scares the doves And the dark crows cry and linger long. This post has been edited by Charlotte: Nov 19 2004, 04:37 PM |
GermanGlenfiddich |
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i've always loved alliterations, but i like the last one best, a bit scared me when i read it and my desk light went off with a *zing*
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Charlotte |
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Unity, Freedom and Peace supporter ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Celtic Lyrics Moderator Posts: 639 Joined: 29-March 03 From: Paris, France Member No.: 6 ![]() |
Scared? lol
I'd say Banshee's Song V is my favourite too. I don't think they're any good actually. Unrhymed Verses was better I'd say. |
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